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Another distant scream...
Another shattered dream.
Lost another bet...
Another cigarette.
The world's only getting stupider...
Mother nature's crying, but no one hears her.
"God" damns you America...
Open eyes see right through ya.
Everybody's fake...
Independence burnt at the stake.
Mass produced welfare...
Never ending warfare.
It's American to hate...
Forecasting your own fate.
Money is where the power's at...
An open minded minority disagrees with that.
Your God would be ashamed...
This world is satan tamed.
My life's lottery is one ###### up game...
Under your masks, you all look the same.
Discriminating, superficial, ignorant waste...
Never gonna give your life another taste.
Kill me more...
I'll never be your bitch.
Look at me, and you will see what's real...
A life your culture couldn't steal.
Close them eyes...
Another friend dies.
Be blind...
And no life is what you will find.
A world of rape, murder, and beer...
The outcasts are who you need to hear.
Nothing lasts forever...
But I, you will remember.
You blew your chance...
Let the chaos dance.
Emptiness feels no pain...
Sobriety's insane.
One day I'll be gone and dead...
Will you remember what I said?
End world, here's my one last breath...
Lets all watch America bring upon our death.
God, make this nightmare end...
We're alone my friend.
Misinterpreted and shoved aside...
Humanity has already died.
Say goodbye...
Time for us all to die.
Lost it all...
Watch me fall...
You'll all see...
The end of humanity.
©2004-2009 ~abandonedpyro
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and well read it for yourself...please comment i put alot of work into this

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*jahg:iconjahg: Jun 29, 2004, 11:56:53 AM
"Kill me more...
I'll never be your bitch."... very strong words, and well phrased. This is poetry indeed - why has no-one commented prior to me? - very surprising.

There's passion and power in this piece, and in the background behind the words, too.
~xopandorasbox:iconxopandorasbox: Jun 29, 2004, 11:09:58 PM
wow this is fuckin amazing! I really like your rhyming...I always thought rhyming sounded cheesy in poems...but yours is really really good. :)

you've inspired me!
~rotang:iconrotang: Jun 30, 2004, 8:17:10 AM
this is very real
'Mother nature's crying, but no one hears her.
"God" damns you America...'
Insanely true...
+fav

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I never met a wise man. If so, it's a woman.
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~subtlenuances:iconsubtlenuances: Jul 1, 2004, 8:25:43 PM
"You blew your chance...
Let the chaos dance. "
Nice.

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what you don't understand you can make mean anything.- Palanhiuk
~NicRiver:iconNicRiver: Jul 4, 2004, 5:23:45 PM
very very good! loved it!! :clap:
:hug:
~abandonedpyro:iconabandonedpyro: Jul 5, 2004, 6:16:04 PM
thanks

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Happiness: We rarely feel it.
I would buy it, beg it, steal it,
Pay in coins of dripping blood
For this one transcendent good.
~ShadesOfBlood:iconShadesOfBlood: Jul 12, 2004, 6:17:24 AM
WOOOoOoOOOW, this is very very good. and very wow.It's an eye opener.
~abandonedpyro:iconabandonedpyro: Jul 13, 2004, 7:29:47 PM
that was the point...haha

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Happiness: We rarely feel it.
I would buy it, beg it, steal it,
Pay in coins of dripping blood
For this one transcendent good.
~shockwave3x:iconshockwave3x: Jul 14, 2004, 5:07:08 AM
wow, that is an amazing piece! the flow is perfecto, and your words and details, superb!

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"You can't spell communism without MUN!" ~Kinnick High School MUN [Model United Nations]
~crazeypotter:iconcrazeypotter: Jul 18, 2004, 4:04:56 PM
omg. this IS classic! i write poetry myself, but dont share it often, because i believe some is very personal. this has very strong words, and is very expressive. you have raw, extreme talent. use it.

//crazeypotter
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