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shake it off. please. by ~abandonedpyro:iconabandonedpyro:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Spoken Word


I shouldn't drive late at night.
No not after this,
the urge is too strong.
It's a desperate
urge.
No one would notice,
its to early and
yet still to late
for bystanders,
for accidents,
for witnesses,
for traffic lights to change.
This would be on purpose,
no one would even notice
not till morning at least
and it would be so easy
to just push
the pedal.
©2007-2009 ~abandonedpyro
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I have always imagined more dramatic and heroic ways to end my life. No I am not myself these days.
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~SnowyDemon:iconSnowyDemon: Jun 26, 2007, 8:34:43 AM
Started reading it and I have to admit, I was expecting it to be about someone who was drink driving. But the ending caught me by suprise. I enjoy it when a piece of literature does that :glomp:

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If I called your name in the darkness, would you come through the light?
~dragonorion:icondragonorion: Jun 28, 2007, 4:18:08 PM
Wow.

I know how you mean, if that makes sense. It kinda scares me, sometimes.

What's on your mind?

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